New Creative Arts WebPage

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 00:27:28 GMT

I'm really struggling with getting plot details exactly right. For instance, I had a character drive to the bank to order a new PIN because the other PIN mysteriously stopped working. Yet, when she arrives at the bank she finds out that someone has requested an online change of PIN (she suspects its her husband). That's all fine. The problem is, why does she need to drive to the bank in the first place if she has the option of ordering a new PIN from her computer.

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Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (Joshuan1) — Thu, 09 Apr 2009 00:19:47 GMT

I just updated my story to be in FIRST PERSON instead. The reason for this was because I have two main characters who aren't who they appear to be.

I have a young boy who isn't really a young boy (he is actually very very old and doesn't know it)

And I have his mother, who isn't really his mother, and isn't even human.

I had to have another character there who would be able to learn about the two characters, instead of the readers having to...

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 01:17:46 GMT

Thanks Joshuan.

I'm about to take a look at the web page now.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (Joshuan1) — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 15:51:30 GMT

PS

I found the answers I asked about and I am going to write an alternative chapter that avoids all of the problems. I guess that I write in OMNISCIENT when I was concerned that I was writing in 3rd person limited.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (Joshuan1) — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 14:07:04 GMT

Great page!

I just noticed this thread so I went and took a look. I am sure it is a blog I will visit over and over again.

And one of your posts made me think so I put a long comment on your site.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (scribe2007) — Sun, 22 Mar 2009 15:54:33 GMT

Thanks, Lozza and Luth!

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feeds@yuku.com (bootsiebabe) — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 10:59:22 GMT

Here here.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (Lutherius) — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 05:58:23 GMT

scribe2007 wrote:
Hi Lozza...yes, I'm well, thanks - just busy, so haven't been around as much. I think also that Ex-P really helped me in the first 13 months after coming out of p/c - helped me sort out my thoughts, feelings etc. about it all. Now I seem to be at a sort of plateau, where I don't want to think about religion much, and I'm building up a new life for myself away from all of that. It's exciting...

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Sat, 21 Mar 2009 01:09:51 GMT

Glad you're back. I was wondering what had happened.

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feeds@yuku.com (scribe2007) — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 17:58:00 GMT

Hi Lozza...yes, I'm well, thanks - just busy, so haven't been around as much. I think also that Ex-P really helped me in the first 13 months after coming out of p/c - helped me sort out my thoughts, feelings etc. about it all. Now I seem to be at a sort of plateau, where I don't want to think about religion much, and I'm building up a new life for myself away from all of that. It's exciting actually! (Sorry...I seem to have taken over your thread! Now that I've started...

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 01:19:15 GMT

Thanks, am about to take a look at the site in a minute or two.

Hope you're well, Scribe.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (scribe2007) — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 01:02:19 GMT

Hey, good to have your new link, Lozza. Looks great! I've left a comment.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:15:19 GMT

Thanks.

The Lake District is an amazing place. I camped out there once in my teens.

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (Lutherius) — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 07:30:20 GMT

England has some nice things when it comes to picturesque rural places. In my trip to the UK back in May, we spent a lot of time in the Lake District. The landscape reminds me somewhat of Northern California's coastal hills region. And one guy explained to me the concept of a Foot Path (I hope I got that term right) where public walking paths stretch all over the country.

One interesting thing about piano Etudes is that for the most part, they are not meant to be listened...

Re: New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (bootsiebabe) — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 06:51:37 GMT

Really nice Lozza.

New Creative Arts WebPage

feeds@yuku.com (lozza) — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 03:46:54 GMT

At the start of the year I began a blog that I soon realised was set out badly, so I ended up registering at wordpress. I've since resigned the entire page with a river in the background and twelve articles on aspects of music and writing. Originally, I intended to include articles on religous groups/sects but I'm not sure I could handle a backlash of angry comments from fundies and pentes, so I think I'll stick to the creative arts for now, although I may add a...